How 'good' are you as a writer?

WORDS serve their function as tools of communication, not arrogance.

I remember a friend of mine from the University of the Philippines-Diliman telling me back during my sophomore year about the difference between UP and UST when it comes to writers. He gave a perfect example: recruitment. Using symbolisms, he said that while UP would inquire, “do you know how to write?,” UST would ask “how good are you as a writer?.”

As a Thomasian writer, of course, I refused to believe that kind of description. UST is home to the greatest writers of the land, but it never meant they think so highly of themselves that they refuse to acknowledge young writers of today just to pass what they have learned to the next generation. In fact, the Varsitarian has been holding the Fiction Workshop for five years now with Thomasian writers such as Francezca Kwe and Jose Victor Torres gracing the event. All along I thought the same things have been happening with other writing groups such as the Thomasian Writers Guild (TWG), but now, I may be wrong.

I was startled to know how some writers of the guild criticized the Literary section of the Varsitarian in an online thread available only for its members. Well, how did I get through it? Some members of the Varsitarian are members also of TWG. I think a few remarks are needed here to protect not the publication, but the University.

Writers should be communicators, not flaunters, of knowledge. What some members of the guild posted in their thread are products of what I consider “superiority complex,” their writers thinking that they are the only sons and daughters of God gifted with the talent of the written word. The only difference is real children of God are humble, just like their Creator.

I do not see any problem being criticized. It is actually a good way to improve one’s self. However, this “weapon” could be harmful if used self-servingly. Just like what we say, in everything you do there would always be the best way to do it, or in this case— the nicest way.

Criticisms need not be publicized if the person concerned is present in the place where you are publicizing it. Tell it in front of his face like a teacher telling his student what is wrong with his spelling or grammar so that he may correct it at that moment or at least explain his point. It is what you call “decency.” That should also apply in this case. By being decent, you are actually teaching him to learn from his mistakes, a job only real teachers are able to do.

Also, in criticizing you do not need to use harsh words like “poor soul” against another writer. In doing so, you are giving the writer more reason to hate you than be thankful for the advice.

That is exactly what that friend of mine from UP is talking about: most UST writers nowadays boast of their talent to others to the extent of stepping on other’s ego. In the more than 40,000 students in the University, I know that there are other good writers out there— probably better than what TWG and the Varsitarian have— who want to join writing groups but cannot do so because they are afraid that they might be criticized, but more so, that they might be insulted or ridiculed.

UST is home to the greatest writers in Philippine history, there’s no doubt about that. But greatness does not mean boorishness. For me, a great writer is one that passes on what he knows to the younger generation so that his talent may transcend the years. Yes, we are doing that, but let’s ask ourselves: are we doing it in a constructive way?

“The pen is mightier than the sword,” it is often said. But some writers resort to hateful words and arrogant speech. They’re slaves of the sword, not apostles of the pen.

where is this online thread anyway?

What did you even mean by saying that UST writers differ from that of UP with the example of recruitment? That, in a way, asking "how GOOD are you as a writer" means "they think so highly of themselves that they refuse to acknowledge young writers of today just to pass what they have learned to the next generation"? Even as an opinion article, I believe it is still the obligation of the writer to present a situation in its totality such that the readers do not GUESS exactly what some TWG members had said. Inferring from your article, it seems that some members of the guild have said some nasty things. They seem like assholes but it would be unfair to make that judgment based solely on your reaction. You are telling these writers not to PUBLICIZE criticism when it was a private online thread and saying all these things that contribute to the idea that, okay, only "some members of TWG" are elitists. Know that the items in the Varsi literary section will always by subject to scrutiny, like all other published materials. So the teacher-student example does not exactly fit the situation. In relation to this statement (of what seems like the status quo) of "UST writers nowadays boast of their talent to others to the extent of stepping on other’s ego" to even say that some UST students are afraid to join TWG or the Varsitarian BECAUSE of this fear of criticism, is not our problem! Both organizations have standards, and they should, as this is how both our alumnis have guided themselves by, even surpassing them, thus making them what they are now. Now I absolutely do not support this pride parade and I have yet to see the actual online thread, but I am saying this as someone who does not understand what has actually happened but is definitely outraged by this opinion column. Also, it is annoying that you are trying to sound like you are taking the high road by giving a lesson on HUMILITY. Oh the irony.

How about the cartoons?

hahah! The comic section could use some work, pero okay lang yun, kasi comics lang yun. XD Anyway, kasi, magusap muna ang mga tao ng matino bago magpublicise, it's not fair for those of us without an entire school paper to use as a sounding board for frustrations and defending friends. What I find offensive is that got published, instead of say something about the magindanao massacre, or incoming elections. I mean, let's use school funds (yung piso pisong inipon ng magulang natin) for better purposes di ba? Lets not waste ink paper and spit on squabbles and take criticism like a shot to the arm, a challange to live up to and say "Ey! you, you, you, naayos namin! wahaha. bawi ka ngayon?" Just my two cents. And yes, galing akong TWG, and isa sa nagrespond dun and gave my two cents sa comic section. haha. XD

Bad Experience with Varsitarian

As a former TWG I have my own share of bad experience din with the Varsitarian recently. I hope the newspaper should at least have the decency to respond properly to queries from writers; should at least respond to writers, with respect, when they ask for the status of the manuscripts they sent. Oh well the author should understand the "temperament" of literary discussions; I'd rather accept the boorishness of ridicules from fellow writers than to recieve it later from ordinary readers. When I joined TWG, I never thought of joining a weekend support group reserved for pot-boiler queens and bored housewives who will help me cope with my domestic problems through writing and Austen.

It's not a matter of who won

It's not a matter of who won an Ustetika, or who's a "writer" who knows about the literary world. It's a matter of good taste. As said, it was a private board, and to flaunt it out to the world, using the university paper, is, I think, unfair. There is a reason why that board is private, and I don't think our casual conversations are something that you must be concerned with. The Thomasian Writers Guild has always been a venue for helping young writers to grow, and constructive criticism is part of it. While we may do things differently in the guild, or while we may throw some harsh words, it doesn't necessarily mean that everything must be understood in context. I do hope that you know that we have offered a joint workshop with the Varsitarian, not because we question your publication's literary capacity but as a way to share whatever knowledge we have of writing and also to learn from you as well. In the end, whatever we may have said, our main concern is, and will always be, to help in making Thomasian Literature alive and be felt, not only in our guild, but in the whole campus. Thank you for permitting me to post this comment.

well most TWG members are

well most TWG members are USTETIKA winners and nationally published writers as well? The comment above looks like the author of this article wrote it.

Yung mga nauna, oo. 'Di rin

Yung mga nauna, oo. 'Di rin maitatanggi na may mga medyo hinahangin ang ulo dahil associated sila sa TWG. Kaya may TWG ay para lalong linangin ang kakayahan ng mga umuusbong na manunulat, hindi para ipamukha sa mga hindi miyembro na mas mataas kang uri ng manunulat.

I don't disagree entirely, but the presentation is a little off.

First of all, what gives you the right to take comments made on a private message board and share those responses with the entire Thomasian community? This is creepily Orwellian and it will, I tell you, have consequences that you should be willing to face.

Although I have seen this article being defended as being an objective reply to criticism made against the Literary section of the Varsitarian, I cannot say that I agree. Certain statements are, well, snarky and insulting, like the statement in the second paragraph which seems to undermine TWG's worth as an organization.

It is also quite hypocritical to say that "Criticisms need not be publicized if the person concerned is present in the place where you are publicizing it." and then go and publish this article. This should have been settled on the message board, since some Varsitarian members (including the Literary editor, since she is a TWG member as well) have access to it. The fact that a tie-up between TWG and Varsi was mentioned in the thread was blatantly omitted from this article. There actually was a proposition made by members of the Thomasian Writers' Guild to work together with Varsitarian on the development of the paper. If this is not "facing" then I don't know what is.

Basically, I find TWG to be unfairly portrayed in the article. Offering to help someone is not pompous in itself but the article has made it seem like that is the case.

Other than that, I must say that I do agree with the sentiment of obliterating this literary hierarchy that paralyzes Philippine writing. Creative writers, journalists and critics/theorists are all relevant and should not be ranked by importance because to do so is impossible. Also, the concept of seniority among writers and works is another cumbersome issue that keeps people from creating and innovating due to over-adherence to canon in fear of upsetting the elders and receiving hurtful comments. This goes double for TWG and Varsi since there should be no concept of seniority among us because we're all undergrads. Respect is obligatory, to both parties, although disagreements are not discouraged, such as in this case.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to say this.

"Criticisms need not be

"Criticisms need not be publicized if the person concerned is present in the place where you are publicizing it. Tell it in front of his face like a teacher telling his student what is wrong with his spelling or grammar so that he may correct it at that moment or at least explain his point. It is what you call “decency.” That should also apply in this case. By being decent, you are actually teaching him to learn from his mistakes, a job only real teachers are able to do."
Well it seems you're not a good writer, neither a decent journalist if you're contradicting your own opinions based on mere speculations (not to mention that you have A LOT of things to say to TWG members, with TWG members probably in your publication or around you and yet you published this). How can you say that the 40,000+ students in UST who want to be writers are AFRAID to join TWG because they fear to be ridiculed? Do you have statistics or have you talked to ALL of them? Or are you just speaking for yourself, maybe a short story of yours has been murdered with unsavory comments in the past? Are you aware of the workshop process?
If you consider yourself a good writer, don't you have other topics to write about, maybe topics that you HAVE ANY KNOWLEDGE on? THIS IS PATHETIC.

er, are you aware of the

er, are you aware of the circumstances in the literary world? are you even a creative writer yourself? don't give a damn about the things that you do not concern and put it into public.. it's pathetic really...

ustetika winner

Don't you know that he is a 3rd placer in katha category of the USTETIKA 2007, annual student awards for literature? CHeck this out: http://www.varsitarian.net/literary/journalism_junior_bags_rectors_literary_award "Ana Grace Garcia (AB-BSE), also a V-Fic fellow, placed second in the Katha category with her entry Perstaym while Prinz P. Magtulis (AB Journalism) placed third for Francis. "

reply to the reply

maybe he/she wants prinz to be a first placer first in order to have a say. hahahahaha

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